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I am stuffed. We have been out for a lovely Indian meal, although it was very noisy as the place was not only full (TT of course!) but also seemed to be hosting a town-cryers convention or similar, judging by the amount of noise coming from a party of about twelve people sitting very near us - much too near us! We could only hear each other if we shouted!!

But as promised I am putting up Chapter 3 of Ten years After. Still suitable for anyone to read I think - and the characters still all belong to Mutant Enemy etc. as per the disclaimer at the end of Chapter 1. You might find it useful to know that neeps are mashed turnip/swede - the root vegetable not the blue eyed blondes! They are a traditional Scottish thing!

If you missed Chapter One it should be
here
And Chapter Two should be
here

Other wise go straight to


CHAPTER THREE.


Dawn’s research training meant that she was looking at the situation methodically, even though the puzzle was herself and, after some time amongst the records, she had written careful notes which she discussed with Giles next afternoon.

The Watchers’ records showed that ‘The Key’ had been around for a very long time. They always spoke of ‘The Key’ – never of ‘A Key’, and the way it had been guarded over the years showed it was a very major magic item.

The monks had been under so great a threat that they had safeguarded The Key by giving it human form and inserting it into the family of the person most likely, in the whole world, to be able to protect it; showing just how desperate they were to prevent such a powerful thing falling into the wrong hands.

If The Key was so important, surely they must have thought about what would happen to it when Dawn became old and died. The energy source would either die with her, after all they had done for so long, or it would float around unguarded – again not in keeping with the job they had done all those years.

Dawn was showing none of the signs of ageing you would normally expect between the ages of twenty and twenty-seven – she thought this herself, and electronic comparisons of photos and vid-files found by Andrew confirmed that, apart from her hairstyle, she had changed not one iota since her twentieth birthday.

Giles had eventually agreed that Dawn could be right. If she remained at her physical peak, without ageing, The Key would not disappear within 70 - 80 years of being formed into ‘Dawn’. This could be a conscious act on behalf of the monks, or it could be a direct result of putting The Key into human form – the magic itself might be so powerful that it preserved ‘the vessel’ in every possible way.

Except that it must be possible to injure or even kill her – note previously broken arm, and Glory trying to kill her to open the portal.

Considered purely as a theoretical problem, they had come to the conclusion that this could be because the monks had been unable to put every possible safeguard into place. There was no definite proof that she could be killed, as no-one had yet achieved it, but it was likely that she could be, at least in certain circumstances; and so the term ‘Highlander Syndrome’ which Dawn had come up with herself, might well be apt.

Giles had said that it would be quite possible for the scientific Watcher staff to carry out tests, probably at cellular level, to confirm or disprove this self-diagnosis. At first Dawn resisted the idea – feeling, like her monastic creators, that the fewer people who knew anything out of the ordinary about her the better; but by the end of the day she had agreed to blood tests and a small tissue biopsy.

That night Dawn went home alone, having not really been able to do the research she had had her mind set on – it would have to wait another day.

In her dreams that night she was still running past people, she could never stay to talk to them; and still she saw glimpses of platinum and black, always running with her, never getting left behind.


……………………………………………………………………………

“Andrew, I need your help”, Dawn said as she walked into the office, full of computers and electronic ‘toys’, just off the Main Library. “I could go do this research myself, or ask a librarian – but I know that you will know exactly where to look for what I want.”

Andrew raised one eyebrow, a move Dawn thought he probably had copied from Giles because he thought it made him look knowing, or inscrutable, or whatever, and said “Me? I’m flattered!”

“Good!” answered Dawn, “As flattery is supposed to get me everywhere. Now, what I want to know is where is Spike?”

This was obviously not quite what Andrew had expected, and he looked somewhat taken aback.

“Spike? Why do you need to know?"he asked. "Why do you think I’d know?”

“Yes, Spike; I need to know where he is because I want to talk to him. And I expect you to know where I’ll find him because, hey, this is the main archive of The Watchers’ Council,” Dawn waved at the computers and the shelves outside the door, piled high with books, discs and even a few scrolls.

“And you know I’ve always been led to believe that we keep as much information as possible on Master Vampires – and Spike, William the Bloody, whoever, is a Master Vampire. Not just any old Master Vampire, but one of only two we know of with A Soul.

"Note my use of capital letters here, Andrew!

"And I expect you personally to know where this information is stored because one, you are the Senior Recorder; two, you were Spike’s Number One Fan not so many years ago; and three, you are downright nosy! Now make with the information, or I will invite you over for a meal and watch you squirm as you try to be polite and eat haggis!”

“With neeps!” she added, as Andrew hesitated.

“All right, all right, you got me!” he answered, and within minutes had pulled up a file on the screen in front of him.

The Slayers, and their Watchers, had been primed to avoid staking Spike and the records showed that, over the last few years, he had crossed the paths of three Slayers – saving the life of at least one of them. The last report was from a Watcher in Brussels dated about ten months previously. Not quite a dead end – but almost as bad – Dawn thought, as he was unlikely to still be there.

Andrew, now anxious to be as helpful as possible, pointed out that there were also a couple of references to Angel passing on information about Spike over the years when The Council, or individual Watchers or Slayers, had been in touch with him. It looked as if Spike kept in touch, at least to some extent, with his grand-sire.

“So do we have a file on Angel? Have we any information on how to get in touch with him?” Dawn asked, to be told that Angel’s phone number was on file, as was the e-mail address for his firm, would those do?

“Why didn’t I know that The Council keeps in touch with Angel?” she demanded of Andrew.

“Well, you’ve been involved with more complicated research for Giles,” Andrew defended himself. “He knows we can ring Angel up any time; he probably just never got you to do it for him because it’s simple enough for him to do it himself.”

‘Probably,’ thought Dawn, ‘Giles thought that the less he reminded me about anything Sunnydale related the better – he probably thought if I wasn’t asking I wasn’t ready to know.’ But Andrew knowing so much more than her was a bit annoying!

Reading files, and having blanks filled by Andrew from his own knowledge, Dawn discovered that Angel was still in L.A., still running Angel Investigations, and still, according to Andrew, being a Good Guy who helped the Little People who had hassle from the Big Bad Guys.

Only that the Really Big Bad Guys, the top ones at Wolfram and Hart, had been in some way banished from this dimension at the time of the Great Battle in L.A. (Andrew could still capitalise verbally better than anyone else Dawn knew). Oh, and Angel had a female partner - a werewolf (!) - and a son who worked in the business!

Dawn left Andrew’s office not knowing whether she most wanted to hug him for being helpful or, more likely, throw things at him for never having filled her in on all the Angel related gossip before – how could he have known all that and not told her?

He was much better at this Watcher business than you would have thought, when it came to only answering what he was asked and opening up on other stuff purely on a need-to-know basis, although why hadn’t he decided that Dawn might at least want to know? Stupid Andrew! Well actually amazingly well disciplined Andrew, she corrected herself – a real credit to The Council she supposed.

She had invited him to dinner anyway – and promised that there would be no haggis, or neeps!




The next chapter is here.

Date: 08/06/2005 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] julia-here.livejournal.com
Neeps must be frightful, if they make haggis more frightening, but... not at Dictionary.com nor my Partridges Concise Disctionary of Slang and Unconventional English. So, I am distracted by an unknown word and my mind goes skittering out of the story for a moment...

Anyway, love the deductive reasoning, here, and Dawn's determination to get everything sorted.

Julia, bouncing around trying to get caugth up on a ton of petty detains here

Date: 08/06/2005 11:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Neeps - traditional accompaniment to haggis - which I was pretty sure Dawn would have eaten at some university 'do' or another. Mashed turnip - or swede, or (I think!) rutabaga, depending on which part of the world you live in. The swede can either be mashed on it's own, as part of a three ingredient meal - haggis,neeps and mashed potato, or the swede and potato can be mashed together - my personal preference! But I was pretty sure that the very idea of haggis would be enough of a threat to get Andrew to co-operate! And he probably has no idea what the neeps are either -just that they sound even more threatening!!

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Date: 08/06/2005 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fenchurche.livejournal.com
I've been meaning to comments since the first chapter and kept putting it off... but I definitely wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying this story greatly! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Date: 08/06/2005 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Thank you - glad you are here!

Date: 08/06/2005 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talesofspike.livejournal.com
My brain's too fried to come up with anything constructive at this time of night but just wanted to let you know that I'm reading and enjoying. Thanks!

Date: 08/06/2005 11:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
My brain's too fried to come up with anything constructive at this time of night

I know the feeling!! Glad you are enjoying it.

Date: 08/06/2005 11:43 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] makd.livejournal.com
Catching up - printing this out, and will read it later tonight, off-line. Looking forward to it!

Date: 08/06/2005 11:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
printing this out,

It's a pretty short section this time - so won't take up more than about 3 - 4 pages I'm afraid!!

Date: 09/06/2005 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] appomattoxco.livejournal.com
I'm really loving this story. You have me on the edge of my seat waiting for Spike to show and I adore your grown-up Dawn and how close she is to Giles. I hope her dreams don't mean she will rteally have to leave everyone behind.

Date: 09/06/2005 09:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
I hope her dreams don't mean she will rteally have to leave everyone behind.

Well not in place....but in time?

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Date: 09/06/2005 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zanthinegirl.livejournal.com
I guess every culture must have it's frightening foods, huh? Haggis certainly fills that slot, though the mashed turnips doesn't sounds to threatening.

Andrew could still capitalise verbally better than anyone else Dawn knew Love your Andrew!

Date: 09/06/2005 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Love your Andrew!

Thank you, thank you!
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Date: 09/06/2005 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Thank you - I liked that writing that bit a lot.

Date: 09/06/2005 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missmurchison.livejournal.com
"Highlander syndrome!" *giggles*

"Haggis!" *giggles more* Indian food is much better!

I liked this chapter, and finding out what's going on with everyone.

Please, ma'am, may I have some more? (And I don't mean haggis!)

Date: 09/06/2005 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
More will be available at the weekend! I'm still quite a bit ahead, so can post twice a week! Thank you for the lovely compliments.

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Date: 09/06/2005 09:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
though my interest in this story demands that I mention it was too short. ^^ You are quite right - it just seemed a good break point - next section will be longer I think!!

Date: 09/06/2005 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frimfram.livejournal.com
Hee - what a marvellous take on Andrew. He's grown and changed, but not too much! Now the symbolism in the dream is becoming clear, that's a very nice touch too. Eagerly awaiting more.

Date: 09/06/2005 09:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Now the symbolism in the dream is becoming clear, that's a very nice touch too

Thank you - glad you liked it. More will be available over the weekend if life goes anywhere near plan.

Date: 09/06/2005 10:30 am (UTC)
elisi: Edwin and Charles (Spike by kathyh)
From: [personal profile] elisi
Lovely - I like the methodical revelation of information, it's a nice change from most stories. ;)

And Angel is still with Nina! Yay! (Sorry, but I think they were very cute!)

It's all snowballing and I'm happily waiting for more! :)

Date: 09/06/2005 12:40 pm (UTC)
elisi: Edwin and Charles (FFL by crackers4jenn.)
From: [personal profile] elisi
Just a thought: Did the monks mean for Spike to be The Keys long-term guardian? I suppose that's what you're aiming for, but could it have been intentional?

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Hi!

Date: 09/06/2005 12:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moedonna.livejournal.com
Thanks for this CW, enjoying!
I'll try just about food, but I'll pass on the haggis.
Neeps are a possibility.... I remember my grandmother mentioning "neeps and tatties," I assume that's when you add potato?
Welcome to epicurean chat!
Neepily yours,
MOE hisownself

Re: Hi!

Date: 09/06/2005 12:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Yep - neeps and tatties is the version with the potato - tastes better than the turnip on it's own IMHO - when I've been to Burns Night Suppers where the haggis is served with seperate mashed potato and turnip I mix all three together a forkful at a time before eating it! On the very odd occasion when I have had haggis at home (husband loves it - but I usually only do it for him on his own)- I mash the whole lot up together on the plate like I was doing a meal for a toddler before I eat it - with lots of black pepper!

Date: 09/06/2005 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cbtreks.livejournal.com
Hi - I just friended you today (I thought I'd done it ages ago - how embarrasing! - that's what happens when you're off-line too long, I guess). I've been enjoying your Dawn Ten Years After story and am looking forward to the next part. You brought up something that never occurred to me - what happens if Dawn dies a natural death. Hmm, does that mean she doesn't need her ten-year tetanus boosters? Lucky girl.

Date: 09/06/2005 08:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
I just friended you today

You're welcome!

- what happens if Dawn dies a natural death

These were the sort of things I wondered about, which is where this story came from really!

Date: 10/06/2005 10:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lillianmorgan.livejournal.com
Hmmm, some very intriguing stuff here; particularly like the idea of Dawn not aging. Certainly a good thing to reach 20 and look the same way for the rest of your life! :)
Loved the banter between Andrew and Dawn and it's amusing that Angel would remain on the radar and Spike fall off it.
And you made me all nostalgic for haggis, tatties and neeps :)

Date: 10/06/2005 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Thank you - I liked the Andrew and Dawn stuff - and I guess Angel would just be easier to keep in touch with as he has a home address! I could see Spike just getting below the radar partly from choice, and partly because of his life style.

Nostalgia for tatties and neeps eh? I wrote about going to a Burns Night Supper back in January - if you want to wallow in a bit more nostalgia the link to my post is
here (http://www.livejournal.com/users/curiouswombat/6940.html#cutid1)


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Date: 11/06/2005 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tesla321.livejournal.com
I'm intrigued, interested, and love the dream of platinum and black running with her....

it's just the Nina issues. I have them. Microfilms of them! But I won't let that scare me off!

Date: 11/06/2005 10:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
it's just the Nina issues. I have them. Microfilms of them! But I won't let that scare me off!
Glad they won't put you off - as I have gone with canon as far as it went I couldn't have Anya move down there to take control of the situation, tempting though it was!!



Date: 11/06/2005 03:55 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jerusha
And the plot thickens! I love Dawn's threat for getting what she wants, although I'm not quite sure what neeps are. Loving this one...

Date: 11/06/2005 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Expanation for neeps above somewhere! Although the very fact that Andrew wouldn't neccessarily know what neeps are either was one of the reasons I though it would be a suitable threat from Dawn, as it is a purely Scottish term which she would have met (and ate!) in Edinburgh.

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primed to avoid staking Spike

Date: 11/06/2005 07:11 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
The Slayers and their Watchers had been primed to avoid staking Spike . . .

Well that's pretty darned decent of them if you ask me. Of course it would be very interesting to learn when that particular memo was sent out by the Chief Watcher and Tea Drinker. After the first bit of news regarding his resurrection, after NFA, or after Buffy's marriage.

Now don't get me wrong. I do like that as a development, something that implies that just maybe Giles and his merry band can learn from their past mistakes and realize that perhaps a little trust and good will is called for.

But this is an example of what I enjoy about your unfolding work, the meticulousness, the little tidbits of information scattered here and there. I've made no secret of how barren of interest I had for Buffy and the Scoobies, which really sounds like a mid Sixties rock group, but something like this makes me begin to wonder and speculate about the possibility of change. I think I mentioned once before that Buffy became boring to me once her creators stopped defining her by what she was capable of doing in favor of what she would not do. Real people are capable of a multitudes of actions. Heroes can flee the battle while cowards stand and fight. A gangster might finance a soup kitchen while the head of a major charity gives himself a benefit package that belongs to the CEO of a Fortune Five Hundred company.

People are not necessarily consistent.


Trouble is, neither is a certain vampire once called William the Bloody. I am now very interested in seeing how he too might have changed in the last decade. Not merely in the cosmetic, the outside appearance. How his attitudes towards certain individuals might have also altered. He might indeed be 'love's bitch and proud of it,' but nothing about him suggests to me that he would still be Buffy's.

Or Dawn's.

Looking forward to chapter five.

pgavigan

Re: primed to avoid staking Spike

Date: 11/06/2005 10:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Thank you - I'm glad that you enjoy the detail - I thought some people might think I was being over-wordy. Although to a large extent it was the detail that interested me more than anything else - had Dawn stopped being the key? Would Willow stay with Kennedy? Would Angel go back to Angel Investigations? What would happen to Illyria, and so on!

I don't neccessarily see Giles as The Chief Watcher - I don't believe he was the OMLY Watcher in the world who survived - a few retired ones would have been around and so on - I usually place him as 'one of the top Council members'. I think having a lot of influence but not having to spend all your time either as the figurehead or doing organisation related stuff, but being able to still spend time thinking about demons and things would suit him. I also think that any other remnants of Council that existed would not neccessarily have chosen him as the new CEO - too maverick in the past! Enough of the senior positions would soon have been taken by younger generation Watchers to make sure that attitiudes changed though, in my version!

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Finally!

Date: 12/06/2005 12:08 pm (UTC)
desdemonaspace: by <lj user="Teragramm"> (Squee!)
From: [personal profile] desdemonaspace
Love this! (I couldn't read earlier, so stuck was I on my own fic.) I love how you suggest a possible immortality for Dawn (although the Highlander Syndrome reference is lost on me, as I did not watch that) -- always the problem with writing pairings with Spike, how to fanwank having her stick around, young and lovely, as no-one seems to envision Spike with an *ahem* mature woman. Love your careful building of Dawn's theory about her Key-ness.

Love Dawn threatening Andrew with haggis and neeps. That would put the fear of God into any wussy American boy! (I put 'em in my New England Boiled Dinner, and love 'em.)

Re: Finally!

Date: 12/06/2005 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Re: Highlander - actually I didn't watch the series, but did see the original film years ago - he simply reaches maturity, and stays there - being injured in battles, but not dieing - I think he could only be killed by another immortal, but am a bit vague about all the exact details. However I thought it would be the sort of name my Dawn would come up with - especially as she is only just coming to the conclusion that something >/i> is odd, but as yet has no real details of what it is, only the idea of what sort of thing it is!

You are right about the idea of the haggis and neeps - it didn't matter whether Andrew knew what they were at all - I reckoned he probably wouldn't - which is why it was such an effective threat!

Date: 14/06/2005 01:30 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] yourlibrarian
Just caught up with the story and am finding it an interesting premise and am looking forward to learning more about everyone's doings in the post-NFA interval. So Connor is working with Angel? And Nina is still around. Guess the business must be giving Angel enough of a misery quotient :>

Date: 14/06/2005 07:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Glad to have you along.

Just caught up with the story

Don't know if you've noticed, but I put Chapter 4 up on Sunday.

Re: Angel - I reckon that Nina and Connor would give him enough to worry about, what with worries about her self-control or cage issues, and Connor's past history!

Date: 04/08/2006 12:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] green-maia.livejournal.com
I love the interaction between Dawn and Andrew!

Date: 04/08/2006 07:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Thank you. I don't remember a lot of interaction between them in the series, I'm glad this is believable.

Date: 07/11/2006 04:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blackbeltchic.livejournal.com
*gags* Nina?! *wails* why?!

Okay, stopping with the melodramatics....another awesome chapter....I love this story, I really like your writing stye, and I love the way you characterize the characters, and I love the way you write in general, especially Dawn. It's so hard to find good Dawn fic because for some reason people don't like her....oh well...another great chapter!

Karen

Date: 07/11/2006 12:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Hi - your comments have turned up via e-mail in a rather haphazard fashion - so I know you are further ahead - where Spike gives his own take on why Nina is a good thing!

I rather like Dawn - and I felt sorry for the character as if, having put her in to keep the mid-teen audience, the writers didn't really make much use of her in later series and seemed to have forgotten her keyness completely - probably the effect of all the cloaking spells.....!

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