Date: 14/04/2010 04:00 pm (UTC)
This was an enjoyable chapter, meeting Legolas's brother. And I like the way you keep Haldirin quietly cute: “Toys! There are toys!”

I loved the ending, too:

Legolas’ expression hardly flickered.

“That is why,” he said, “your Ada does not have to check that you have washed behind your ears…”


Good old Leggy! You've got me worried with the eligible ellith, though :-/

ETA: Only as far as your buttocks, LOL.
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